The graphs below show the number of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia.
The provided line graph give information on a discrepancy between the number of male and female laborers in different sectors in Freedonia in two years: 1975 and 1995.
As can be seen, initially, in 1975 men dominated in all given employment sectors; the discrepancy ranged from 20 people in communication sector to nearly 400 people in manufacturing. Then, 20 years later women outnumbered their counterparts in communication and trading; nevertheless, male employees remained dominant in most sectors. Interestingly, in such spheres as manufacturing and non-defence public sector the gap had been unaltered (the discrepancy was nearly 400 people and 200 people respectively). In contrast in other sectors the gap was reduced significantly.
Overall, the gap between the number of male and female employees remained unchanged in some sectors in Freedonia for 20 years; however, the discrepancy in gender in most sectors was decreased minimising the gap; even women became dominant in the some sectors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... people and 200 people respectively. In contrast in other sectors the gap was reduced si...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... gap; even women became dominant in the some sectors.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290697674419 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.104651162791 0.116061578633 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0813953488372 0.0759168565197 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0639534883721 0.0366838410393 174% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00581395348837 0.0131127313244 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151162790698 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.046511627907 0.0379272487307 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23984329625 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00581395348837 0.0210936926555 28% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0872093023256 0.0948980150116 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00581395348837 0.00437022459523 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1001.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.435064935065 0.337110787985 129% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318181818182 0.247514529752 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266233766234 0.171178102325 156% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181818181818 0.112407865282 162% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23984329625 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 47.8105315618 49.3433353143 97% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6666666667 23.0094962315 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6647398522 42.9750493124 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.833333333 135.714022679 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.0094962315 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 57.4848484848 47.7609492067 120% => OK
Elegance: 2.8 2.94281807926 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52343122279 0.418131533498 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.188018262841 0.181151798455 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0946521791957 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.742559465307 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197989748724 0.157042692854 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.307944486925 0.228904883108 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14960643486 0.108899403657 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.461735432336 0.367819155151 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0691649064884 0.0812612215331 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.448480770425 0.316326947829 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979349365181 0.0921553760075 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.