Gross Domestic Product in the UK
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart compares the generation of gross domestic products from two different industries as IT and Service industry from 1992 to 2000 in the UK and the units are measured in percentage. Overall what stands out from the graph is that both industries had increased products but IT was considerably higher than the Service throughout the whole time period mentioned in the question.
To begin with, in 1992, products from the IT stood at 6 percent. However, following two years, there was a significant increase to around 8 %, which was almost as close as in the year 1996 at around 7.8%. Although there was a minimal drop in 1996, the rate rose rapidly to 12 percent in the next two years and further rising markedly to approximately around 14.5% at the end of the period.
With regards to a second industry, beginning the period at 4 percent, it witnessed sudden jump to just over 6 percent in 1994. Nevertheless, for the rest of the period, there was gradual increase in the rate, eventually finishing at 8 percent, which was nowhere as close as IT in 2000.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
it witnessed sudden jump
it witnessed a sudden jump
there was gradual increase
there was a gradual increase
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 187 200
No. of Characters: 852 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.698 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.556 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.6 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.734 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.467 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.693 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... To begin with, in 1992, products from the IT stood at 6 percent. However, following ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71657754011 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67258519681 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8276088713 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093140352478 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534863159339 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710834163523 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669132688761 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617752955158 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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