This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of dairy production by the world’s top 3 producers from the real IELTS exam. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart compares 4 distinct types of dairy products in terms of their three largest exporting regions in 2012.
Overall, it is evident that EU was the only counterpart that occupied a ranking in all categories. In addition, all values exceeded 700 metric tons.
Turning into detail, in comparisons to EU, which exported above 140 thousand metric tons of milk, the figure for India was slightly lower, with exactly 127 thousand. Nevertheless, in terms of butter, with 4500 metric tons, how much the latter exported dwarfed that of the former by a ratio of more than 2 to 1. Meanwhile, with about 90 thousand and 810 metric tons, respectively, United States ranked third in both milk and butter sector.
Regarding the remaining products, EU came out on top of cheese exports with approximately 7 thousand metric tons, followed by the United States, with nearly 5 thousand. By contrast, Brazil languised in the opposite ends with only 700. Unlike the aforementioned categories, Milk Powder witnessed the dominance of China and New Zealand. While the former exported 1200 metric tons, the latter recorded a value of above 1100, exceeding 770 metric tons exported by EU.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, regarding, so, third, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11794871795 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6971824001 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65641025641 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4779935429 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0210240726981 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00882645688485 0.103423049105 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157050675639 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0177642973803 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192128894739 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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