Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Today, large shopping malls are constructed everywhere. Basically, in metro cities, like Delhi, Mumbai and Bangalore etc. Thus, small malls are replaced by large shopping malls. I think it is a great move by the people. In this essay, we discuss advantages of large shopping malls like convenient, diversification and entertainment.
Firstly, large shopping malls are convenient to the people. For example, I hate going different products for different shops. Big bazaar gives the entire product in the same place like household products and vegetables. It is also convenient in parking. Thus, smalls have no parking area which increases the traffic on the road side. Therefore, this is a one of the advantages of the large shopping malls.
Secondly, large shopping malls also serve food and entertainment for people. For example, I am a movie buff and foodie person. After, a tiring shopping I feel like hungry so treat myself with a food and a movie session. Thus, malls have good restaurants and for the entertainment purpose. Therefore, large malls are better place to get relaxed after a shopping.
In the conclusion, shopping malls are convenient, diversified and for a entertainment purpose. Thus, large shopping malls are replacing small shops is a forward move. It will benefit in future. Therefore, it is expected that all small shops will be supersede by large shopping malls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21875 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90127399334 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1987617563 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.45 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2 22.9334400587 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318789769053 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108667194049 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105480988318 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216855124163 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693259319614 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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