The line graph demonstrates employment rates in three sectors of British economy from the year 2000 to 2010.
It can be seen that in this timeframe the employment structure in the United Kingdom experienced a significant change. For instance, from the year 2000 to 2003, the most significant employer of the nation was private sector, where 47 per cent of the entire national workforce did their jobs in the year 2000. However, private sector’s role started to diminish and in 2003 public sector employed the same number of people as enterprises not owned by the government. Later, the share of private sector on labour market continued to decline and in 2008 self-employed people comprised 28 per cent of British workforce and outstripped the bulk of private businesses, which at that moment stood at 26 per cent.
In 2010, public sector was still the biggest employer in the nation, as more than 50 per cent of labor force was involved in this sector, while the percentage of self-employed and employees at private enterprises stood at 30 and 20 per cent respectively.
The line graph demonstrates employment rates in three sectors of British economy from the year 2000 to 2010.
It can be seen that in this timeframe the employment structure in the United Kingdom experienced a significant change. For instance, from the year 2000 to 2003, the most significant employer of the nation was private sector, where 47 per cent of the entire national workforce did their jobs in the year 2000. However, private sector’s role started to diminish and in 2003 public sector employed the same number of people as enterprises not owned by the government. Later, the share of private sector on labour market continued to decline and in 2008 self-employed people comprised 28 per cent of British workforce and outstripped the bulk of private businesses, which at that moment stood at 26 per cent.
In 2010, public sector was still the biggest employer in the nation, as more than 50 per cent of labor force was involved in this sector, while the percentage of self-employed and employees at private enterprises stood at 30 and 20 per cent respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, still, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02222222222 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84585468513 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4406589667 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428592537448 0.215688989381 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.276505657287 0.103423049105 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.218252895582 0.0843802449381 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361646525755 0.15604864568 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212215967895 0.0819641961636 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.