The line graph demonstrates employment rates in three sectors of British economy from the year 2000 to 2010.
It can be seen that in this timeframe the employment structure in the United Kingdom experienced a significant change. For instance, from the year 2000 to 2003, the most significant employer of the nation was private sector, which employed 47 per cent of the national labor force in the year 2000. However, private sector’s role started to diminish and in 2003 public sector employed as many people as enterprises did. Later, the share of private sector on labour market continued to shrink and in 2008 self-employed people comprised 28 per cent of British workforce and outstripped the bulk of businesses, which at that moment stood at 26 per cent. In 2010, public sector was the biggest employed 50 per cent of employees in the nation, while the percentage of self-employed and private sector stood at 30 and 20 per cent respectively.
To sum up, it is obvious that public sector in the UK is the most important on labor market.
The line graph demonstrates employment rates in three sectors of British economy from the year 2000 to 2010.
It can be seen that in this timeframe the employment structure in the United Kingdom experienced a significant change. For instance, from the year 2000 to 2003, the most significant employer of the nation was private sector, which employed 47 per cent of the national labor force in the year 2000. However, private sector’s role started to diminish and in 2003 public sector employed as many people as enterprises did. Later, the share of private sector on labour market continued to shrink and in 2008 self-employed people comprised 28 per cent of British workforce and outstripped the bulk of businesses, which at that moment stood at 26 per cent. In 2010, public sector was the biggest employed 50 per cent of employees in the nation, while the percentage of self-employed and private sector stood at 30 and 20 per cent respectively.
To sum up, it is obvious that public sector in the UK is the most important on labor market.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91011235955 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80725789369 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6489276295 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445125514696 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250131613824 0.103423049105 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220314290218 0.0843802449381 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33082827355 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245864361834 0.0819641961636 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.