Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Nowadays, many people look up to their ideal and the person who influence them. Many people think regions affect successful person. There are many factors that influence a successful person and region are one of the factors. The other factors which influence a people are motivation, hard work, capability and determination etc. In this essay we discuss opinion about native regions influence on person.
Firstly, native region affect the person in many ways like the way of thinking, and determination of the person. Regions affect people like they belong from rural or urban area. Rural area people are motivated they look up to many of the successful person like the live in that environment they have all means of support, but in rural are they only think about how to fulfill their need like food and living. For example, urban are excess to the entire successful person because they like in a metro area and rural are people are not excess to them like actor and cricketer live in metro cities. Therefore, regions influence people in many ways.
The second reason is many of the top business and politicians are belong from small cities. For example, Narendra Modi our prime minister belong small place in Gujarat and DhiruBhai Ambani also belong from small place in Gujarat and he is the founder of reliance. Thus native place they belong from small place but they are successful person. Therefore, native place are the just one factor which influence person.
In the conclusion, native place is just a factor which influence the regions because they are able to get opportunity. Therefore, it just matter of point of time after that it’s all about your hard work and capability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95438596491 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4057333795 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424561403509 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9782716493 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494155808604 0.215688989381 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209131114115 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143951357378 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297635078392 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139963733877 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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