Number of plants and animals are declining Explain this problem and suggest some solutions

Essay topics:

Number of plants and animals are declining.
Explain this problem and suggest some solutions.

As we all know that the total number of plants and animals are decreasing in whole world. Both the plants and animals are related to each other in various stages. It can result in most of the aspects of human beings in every part of their life in earth. We shall discuss the aftermaths and some solutions for them.

The plants and animals are inevitable part of the environment, where human beings live. Plants help in absorbing some poisonous gases like carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide and release oxygen into the atmosphere. Plants are important for preventing global warming. Animals are one of the crucial sector in the chain of ecosystem. Nowadays due to interruption of human beings and several other factors the number of plants and animals have been decreased significantly. For example, the population growth has forced man to innovate new areas for living. Finally their search for shelter ends in front of a forest and thus leads to deforestation. Demolition of the plants and trees will obviously affect the number of animals too. This is a true vicious cycle.

The interruption of human beings being the problem, there lies the solution too. The government should pass certain laws like the aquisition of land by human beings must be limited to an extent that it would prevent them from being entering the forest. And government themselves have to provide support to build up apartments rather than single houses. Global warming Awareness programs should be spread worldwide and should act accordingly.

To conclude its a overwhelming fact that the number of plants and animals are decreasing and which might effect the whole ecosystem of human beings. One of the important problem being the interference of human beings; they should be restricted in encroaching and should be given support for further solution.

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Average: 5.3 (5 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'as for', 'for example']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273846153846 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.144615384615 0.116061578633 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0892307692308 0.0759168565197 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0246153846154 0.0366838410393 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0338461538462 0.0131127313244 258% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135384615385 0.155750635184 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0553846153846 0.0379272487307 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62271723093 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246153846154 0.0210936926555 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00175180941692 176% => OK
Determiners: 0.101538461538 0.0948980150116 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338461538462 0.00437022459523 774% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00615384615385 0.00967000014798 64% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1838.0 1161.00487805 158% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.9 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08609271523 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73763899035 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400662251656 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261589403974 0.247514529752 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149006622517 0.171178102325 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115894039735 0.112407865282 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62271723093 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.8507010426 49.3433353143 117% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 8.93414634146 213% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 15.8947368421 23.0094962315 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3558131852 42.9750493124 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 23.0094962315 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.689975730869 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 42.0536772395 47.7609492067 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.28787878788 2.94281807926 78% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340777255902 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0789183835408 0.181151798455 44% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620959924974 0.0850326197045 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498039096888 0.706616315825 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185893632186 0.157042692854 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149189993207 0.228904883108 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942862852462 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.471307082551 0.367819155151 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0912512460674 0.0812612215331 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25323698065 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09973848457 0.0921553760075 108% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70731707317 324% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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