The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart represents the information on UAE government spending money from the budget of AED 315 billion for different sectors in 2000.
Overall, government spend highest amount for social security about more than quarter amount in total while the lowest amount was to transport services.
It is clear that although the social security costs 100 billion, the second highest money went to health and personal social services with 53 billion. At the same time, Education expends about 38 billion. Moreover, the government spends almost equal amount for defense, Debt interest and other expenditure with nearly 23 billion. Further, expenses for low and order and housing heritage and environment were almost 16 million. Finally the lower amount other than transport was to industry agriculture and employment.
To sum up, we can get clear idea that government gave more important to social security. Also spend considerable higher amount to health and personal social services and education.
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