The pie charts below describe average household expenditures by major categories in Japan and Malaysia in 2010.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The charts compare the average household spending in Japan and Malaysia in
terms of five important categories in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that householders in both countries spent the largest
proportion of their income on just three categories – housing, food and other goods and services. The percentage figures for spending on transport and
healthcare in Japan were double those for Malaysia.
In Malaysian households, the highest category was housing, which represented
34% of the total expenditure. Whereas this was higher than in Japan, with just
21% spent on housing, Japanese householders spent the highest proportion on a
range of other goods and services, at 29%. This was slightly more than in
Malaysia. In terms of food, the figures for both countries were similar, at 27%
and 24% for Malaysia and Japan respectively.
Expenditure on health care was the lowest category. In Japan, this accounted
for 6% of the total, while 20% of household spending went on transport. These
figures were exactly double those shown for Malaysia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3630952381 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78015700261 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2788773689 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 67.0 1.69756097561 3947% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224945061523 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992673003496 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709059741701 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904789136605 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684585232648 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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