The stipulated pie diagram describes the average domestic expenses in a country in 1950 and 2000. The mentioned parameters are housing, food, health care, education, transportation and other.
It is clear from the data that, almost two third (72.1%) of the expenses were incurred for housing in 1950. Whereas, after a 50 yers of time this proportion was reduced drastically to one fifth of the total household expenses. Food was by far the highest percentage (11.2%) in domestic expenditure in 1950, followed by education and others (6.6% and 4.4%). Health care only accounted for a very small proportion of 2.4%.
On the other hand, there was a significant difference in expenditure pattern of households during 2010. One third (34%) of people's spendings was on food, almost three fold rise as compared to the previous figures. One important thing to be noted that, unknown expenses were increased drastically and registered almost 15% difference in proportion over the period of 50 years. Likewise, transportation expenses also were hiked to a considerable figure of 14%. Education expenses and health care expenses stayed at the same proportions despite some slight changes.
In conclusion, All expenses showed an increasing trend over the period of time. Expenses like food and others increased significantly while, expenditures like housing and education showed a fall in proportions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'rise' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'rises'.
Suggestion: rises
...pendings was on food, almost three fold rise as compared to the previous figures. On...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ses showed an increasing trend over the period of time. Expenses like food and others increase...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...education showed a fall in proportions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, third, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38073394495 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95833153044 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0495051555 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2307692308 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969185261697 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398191548167 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512196489996 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703033270194 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283054834356 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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