The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007 Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate Write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
Write at least 150 words

The pie charts compare the number of housing ownership and renting in the UK for 1991 and 2007 in percentage terms.

In 1991, home owner took the main proportion, which was approximately 60% or over half of all homes. Socially rented homes accounted for 22% or a quarter of all homes. The remaining homes were mostly private renting (10%) with a tiny fraction of social housing, which only took 6%.

Sixteen years later, in 2007, there was an increase in the percentage of home owner, which has reached 70% or thee quarters of all. This was a rise of 10% compared with 1991. The increase of home ownership could be explained by the the decrease of social renting from 22% in 1991 to 18% in 2007. Privately rented homes remained unchanged. However, there were 5 more millions homes so the number of private renting must have risen despite of being unchanged in percentage. Social housing decreased three-fold compared with 1991, which had dropped from 6% to nearly 2%.

To summarize, home owner is the largest sector while social housing is the least popular type of housing.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81720430108 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44358239564 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586021505376 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9136360295 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155095772749 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716016812727 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798168523571 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132302458729 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10900606227 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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