The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate how a university's sports center will change after refurbishment.
Overall, the center will expand in length after being developed. It is noticeable that there will be facilities for entertainment such as a cafe, dance studios, and a sports store added to the center in the future.
At the present, there are two outdoor courts for sports in the center, but all activities in this place will be indoor in the future. Although the fitness suite on the top of the diagram is expected to undergo an expansion in length after redevelopment, the 25-meter pool to the south of it will remain unchanged. However, it is likely to have another larger pool for leisure located in the west of the center.
Turning to the other features, there will be two more changing rooms on the bottom corners of the layout after improvement in addition to the one next to the smaller pool at the moment. Also, a new sports hall is expected to lie to the east of the seating area which will be at the same location. Significantly, there will be two dance studios built on the right as well as one sports shop and one cafe added on the bottom of the center in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The pictures illustrate how a universitys sports center will change a...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...smaller pool at the moment. Also, a new sports hall is expected to lie to the east of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58571428571 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60019622493 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4855810532 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135737736366 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700546819306 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518372387071 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110229464058 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550317795495 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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