result of the survey of adult education

Essay topics:

result of the survey of adult education.

Bar chart shows that adult students are interested to learn in a university because they have a goal after graduating the study and or they have several objectives when they involve in education. Many of them like the subject they taken (40%) and less of them have a purpose to make a connection in college (9%).
Other reasons why adults choose to get an education are they want to be more qualified (38%), several of them want to understand more about current assignments given to them (22%), a couple of them are glad to get knowledge and wide insight (12%) and small number of adults dare to get promotion from employer (10%).
According to the pie chart, the fund foundation of each course should be divided by 3 parts. The highest amount is contributed by learner 40% of study cost. Company pays only 35% of the cost and government can support 25% only.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'took'?
Suggestion: took
...ion. Many of them like the subject they taken 40% and less of them have a purpose to ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44430463408 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.7621269141 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087927320441 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295776896204 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430660845275 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496428368386 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035217605992 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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