Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Today, the law is for everyone and for everything. Laws are made for people to follow it helps to make a good society. Therefore, it helps to differentiate human and animals. Thus, humans are homo-sapiens. In this essay, we will discuss believe that laws change human behavior.
Firstly, laws help people to be in limit and protective. Law helps human to follow rules and regulation made by the government. For example, traffic rules, instances fines are levied for jumping red light this will make people fear and obedience the rules of traffic. It exemplifies, that law force a human to follow rules and regulation.
Secondly, moreover, the law brings responsibility among the human. For example, restriction over drinking alcohol in public place or age restriction less than 21, punishment over parole, environment duties. It exemplifies, that the rules make a person responsible. They follow rules for their safety and this makes the difference between humans and animals. The law changes human behavior.
In the conclusion, the law change human behavior and they made them responsible and obedient. Therefore, it is shown the changes of human behavior. Thus, everyone has to follow the rules made by the government it will benefit them. They made the environment safe and place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...the environment safe and place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80899510764 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4054773599 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8333333333 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272422889063 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122674692683 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12382392505 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19220969729 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479238842927 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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