Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">The world is changing fast, so are the preferences and habits of the people. While some people believe that changing has a positive effect which provides new experiences, instructive lessons, and awareness on their life, others, however, think that changing the way they live has a detrimental effect which they should avoid on their life. In this essay, I will examine both sides of argument and provide my overall opinion.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why people think that changing is a kind of process that people should avoid. The main reason of this is that they want to protect themselves from danger which includes new ideas, habits, or people. they think that every new thing comes to their life has a potential to harm them. According to my experiences, one of my friends defined herself as a “conservative”. she denies everything new in her life and tries to live a basic life. When I asked the reason why she preferred to be a conservative person, she answered she wanted to protect herself from new things which would transform her life into miserable situations. another reason is that changing may cause new difficulties in their life. Taking car as an example, if someone buys another car for a change, driving new car can be more difficult than previous one. As a result, for those who do not want anything new, change can have a negative impact on their life.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Despite these arguments, there are also some people who think that change may provide new advantages in their life. The main advantage is new experiences which can be learnt by changing something. For instance, we can learn how to survive by using our camp experiences in any kind of urgent situation such as earthquake or flood. In addition this, people can be more awareness as they prefer to learn and live new things. Helping orphanage may provide you to be more knowledge and sensitive about charities. I strongly believe that we cannot learn everything we need on our own. so, sometimes someone needs to get into our life in order to learn what true is. Even though some changes cause some bad experiences, we should think it as a lesson that we should never do it again. if we had not tended to do it, how would have we learnt true one? so, it is imperative to act immediately before we regret our mundane life.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">In conclusion, it is clear that it is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of argument. In some people’s opinion, doing same thing every day and avoiding change is a better idea due to damages of changes. however, others think that changing is an essential part of our life in terms of new experiences and awareness. I believe that life would be easier if we try to learn and live new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 1.00243902439 1796% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 3.15609756098 697% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 5.60731707317 1195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 965.302439024 261% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 491.0 196.424390244 250% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1283095723 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 3.73543355544 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32435028558 2.65546596893 163% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 106.607317073 219% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474541751527 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 283.868780488 275% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 8.94146341463 291% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2778570288 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 1.13902439024 1141% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186017166429 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611166231094 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562431341682 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138735942547 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179140050858 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 40.7170731707 251% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.