Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that people who get a occupation as soon as possible and stabilize with it are more likely to satisfy with there career life. In my opinion, satisfaction in job are not determinded by when you start your job or how long you pursue it. This essay will outline some important factors believed to be involved.
Some people believe that have a job early and pursue it for long period provides various great benefits. For example, they will have better financial situation as they have been working for a long time.In addition to this, people who chase a particular job will be able to advance to the top of their field, and therefore enhance satisfaction of their life.
On the other hand, there also are many advantages if you change to different type of work. For example, peopel who are not suitable for staying in a particular job for long term will have to change their occupation to keep their satisfaction level. In addition to this, young people are lack of skills and experiences, therefore they have to explore a range of different career paths early on to choose what is fit with them the most.
In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may be different from another. Some may want to pursue a particular job to get to the highest status. Others, however, may find it esier for them to gain experiences in life after start a flexible career. Either way, I believe that it is much better, especially for young people after graduation, should pay attention to what they passion on because it do not guarantee job satisfaction if you soon have a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70462633452 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57935687744 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512455516014 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7638237241 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258779281813 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984766744357 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062882352712 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170555774086 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423099516112 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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