The table below show predicted and actual immigration figures for the UK for the years 1984 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

Every year there are people who keep migrating from place to place for various reasons. Could be for education,business,visit etc. Countries though welcome new people to the home culture it is important to verify the identity of the individuals. One such way to assess the individual is through immigration.

We have a chart that displays the data of expected and achieved immigration report. As we see there is increase in the prediction value across the year, the achieved value also gave more or less equal impact. This shows that the number of people keep migrating every year is gradually increasing.

Let us analyze the report of immigration for UK across the year 1984-2000. The chart in total shows that the target has been achieved more than the predicted value. Out of the 16 years in the report, almost 7 years showing the targets met the requirement with minimal deviation.

Lets note the statistic still more detail, 1984-85 has big outcome of more than 50% of predicted value. Next we see the same impact on 1988 & 1992 as well. Other than 1996-97 throughout the period there is either gradual increase or balance in value of achievement.

In an average of once in every two years there is big difference in the result including 1996-97. At the end of the analysis it is found UK immigration has cleared more than the expected criteria.

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Average: 6 (2 votes)

As we see there is increase
As we see there is an increase

there is big difference
there is a big difference

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For IELTS writing task I, you don't need the paragraph one. It is enough to write the essay according to tables or graphs.

Attribute Value Ideal
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Different Words: 135 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.907 4.0
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