The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table represents the consumer durables like telephone, television, dishwasher and so on owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. The highlighting feature of the table was the ownership of central heating was uplifted by nearly 30% in these 11 years.
As is observed from the given data, television was the most common consumer durable with 93% in 1972 and 98% in 1983 in Britain. The video has been invented later in 1983 and only 18% of the houses had it. 87% of the British houses had vaccum cleaners in 1972 whereas in next 12 years, it had been surged to 95% which shows 12% climb in it.
The percentage of refrigerator and washing machine climbed at the same percentage in Britain with 73% in 1972 and 94% in 1983. Even in between years it had surged at same rate. Moreover, dishwasher has been innovated near about 1978. As only 5% British houses had dishwasher in 1983. Only 42% British houses had telephone facility in 1972 whereas it soared to 77% in 1983. It is a great of increased demand of telephone facility in Britain.
While analysing overall, the least common consumer durable with only 5% was dishwasher whereas the most common consumer durable was television with 98%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her has been innovated near about 1978. As only 5% British houses had dishwasher i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50989167356 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504807692308 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7429091647 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192141424349 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783641755274 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897743004118 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130897531917 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574575482197 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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