The table below shows the production of carbon d Nkioxide in five different countries in 2006.
The table illustrates the total production of carbon dioxide per person in the USA, Russia, Japan, India, and China in 2006. It also compares the total tonnes of carbon dioxide emission in 2005 and 2006 along with the changes in a year. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, even though the USA stands at the highest position in carbon dioxide production amongst the other given countries, it has reduced the production in a year. In contrast, the emission of carbon dioxide in India was low but it increased production over the years dramatically. Whereas, the greatest change is in China in 2006
Production of carbon dioxide per person is 19.8 million in the USA, and the total production was 5879 in 2005 which reduced to 5540 million in the following year. However, India had only 1.4 million tonnes of carbon dioxide production per person which increased the total production from 1275 to 1450 million tonnes by 2006. Moreover, the other three countries have less than 10 million tonnes of carbon dioxide production in the given year.
Regarding the changes in production, all the given countries have been escalating the carbon dioxide emission except the USA which declined two percent in 2006. Furthermore, carbon dioxide production in China and India surged to 11% and 8% respectively. Whilst, Russia and Japan had minimal changes in carbon dioxide production with below or around one percent.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...production over the years dramatically. Whereas, the greatest change is in China in 200...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oduction of carbon dioxide per person is 19.8 million in the USA, and the total p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10775862069 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.573297522 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456896551724 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4121620583 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254111060633 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121647492342 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473561541484 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182378056041 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149600295718 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...production over the years dramatically. Whereas, the greatest change is in China in 200...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oduction of carbon dioxide per person is 19.8 million in the USA, and the total p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10775862069 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.573297522 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456896551724 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4121620583 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254111060633 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121647492342 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473561541484 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182378056041 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149600295718 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.