The table below shows the result of a survey in which people of different age group were asked their about favourite tv programme
The table illustrates percentage of people of different age groups and their favourite television program.
The percentage of people of 11 to 15 age years group preferred to watch cartoon and the fiqures was 29%,whereas the lowest percentage of them like to watch the news and the percentage was 6% .The percentage of feature films,soap operas and tv dramas were almost same for 11 to 15 years old people.The figures were 18%, 17% and 20% respectively.8% of people of 11 to 15 years old people preferred to watch sports
On the other hand, the highest percentage of people of 16 to 20 age group like to watch feature films.However this group of people preferred to watch sports,and the fiqures was 11%.In addition 21% of people age 16 to 20 years old liked watching both news and cartoon.The percentage of soap operas and tv dramas were almost same for the group of 16 to 20 years.The figure were 18% and 20% respectively.
Moreover,29% of people of 21 to 25 age group preferred to watch sports the most while this group of people least preferred to watch cartoons and the figure was 4%.20% of people 21 to 25 years old liked watching both feature films and soap operas.The percentage of people of 21-25 age group preferred to watch news and the fiqures was 20%.However,14% people of 21-25 years old preferred to watch tv dramas.
To conclude,it can be said that the percentage of people from each of the three groups was almost same except feature films and tv dramas,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77431906615 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74855837121 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.357976653696 0.547539520022 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 22.4926829268 285% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 284.431340573 43.030603864 661% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 306.75 112.824112599 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.25 22.9334400587 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 5.23603664747 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198597089174 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177970221686 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101356401575 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165914647333 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945566111631 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 13.2329268293 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.9 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.3012195122 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.9970731707 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...watch the news and the percentage was 6% .The percentage of feature films,soap ope...
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...tch the news and the percentage was 6% .The percentage of feature films,soap operas...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tch the news and the percentage was 6% .The percentage of feature films,soap operas...
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...most same for 11 to 15 years old people.The figures were 18%, 17% and 20% respectiv...
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...ld liked watching both news and cartoon.The percentage of soap operas and tv dramas...
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...st same for the group of 16 to 20 years.The figure were 18% and 20% respectively. ...
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...erred to watch tv dramas. To conclude,it can be said that the percentage of peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77431906615 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74855837121 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.357976653696 0.547539520022 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 22.4926829268 285% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 284.431340573 43.030603864 661% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 306.75 112.824112599 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.25 22.9334400587 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 5.23603664747 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198597089174 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177970221686 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101356401575 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165914647333 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945566111631 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 13.2329268293 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.9 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.3012195122 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.9970731707 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.