The table below shows the results of a survey of the average number of cars per hour using three suburban roads during working hours in a ten-year pollution monitoring programme. Traffic calming was introduced in Harper Lane at the beginning of 1999.Write

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The table below shows the results of a survey of the average number of cars per hour using three suburban roads during working hours in a ten-year pollution monitoring programme. Traffic calming was introduced in Harper Lane at the beginning of 1999.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the data.

A glance at the table provided reveals the consequences of the study of the average number of cars per hour on three provincial roads starting from 1993 and until 2002. It can be clearly seen that there were wild fluctuations in the number of cars over a period of 10 years, but the trend was upward.
It is observed that in the first 6 years of the period, the number of cars increased on Harper Lane and Long Lane roads. Meanwhile, Great York Way was uniform with a slight fluctuation. Then, there was a dramatic drop in Harper Lane numbers from 915 to 204 during the next 2 years and this was followed by a slight increase until at the end of the period. Great York Way numbers came with a moderate rose in 1999, and then trend was relatively static until the end, while Long Lane trend was an upward and numbers doubled over the period of 4 years.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
A glance at the table provided reveals t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of 10 years, but the trend was upward. It is observed that in the first 6 years...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34375 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26211149979 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.203541189 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253744015286 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130026754169 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709725990243 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20259630674 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185832568617 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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