The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

The tabular chart contrasts the feedback of males and females about the satisfaction level of the services provided by the city sports club. The spectacular feature of the chart is the gratification of females with the opening hours of the club.

As is observed from the graph, more than half of the males were very glad by the range of activities the club offered while only a small proportion was disappointed. However, a little more than the one-third of females were highly satisfied and satisfied whereas only third-tenth were upset from the concerned.

Moreover, almost equal number of male and females were pleased with the facilities of the club. On the contrary, 4% more females were downhearted by the club facilities as compared to the males.

Moving further, Opening hours meet the expectations of a slightly less than the third-forth of females but only 44% males were very satisfied by the same. In addition, the majority of males were discouraged with the provision of timings.

Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.

Votes
Average: 9.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, third, whereas, while, in addition, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11282051282 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71917727434 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9116499156 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17146180441 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882057956895 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681469870698 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115360450568 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764441023622 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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