The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’sactivities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons whererelevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table provided reveals information about a sportsclub’s member response to a survey on 3 factors: range of activities, tools and working time.
It is clear that overall, most of the club’s members, in both genders, felt satisfied with the provided service. However, there are different reviews between the two sexes, in the club’s activities and opening hours.
As can be seen from the table, for positive response first, a great number of members rated very satisfied, accounting for the largest share in all 3 standards. There is a significant figure of female members considered the working time of the club excellent, reaching 72 per cent. The figure of member in both sex considered the service of the club satisfied ranged from the low of 19 per cent in the male review on the opening hour to a high of 40 per cent in the male consideration on activities.
With regard to negative feedbacks, there are differences between male and female on range of activities and working time. While approximately on third of female considered the range of the activities of the club not satisfied, there is a mere of 5 per cent of male thought so. In contrast of the minority 3 per cent of negative reviews on opening hours of female, over 37 per cent of male member did not satisfied with this feature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...re of 5 per cent of male thought so. In contrast of the minority 3 per cent of negative ...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...over 37 per cent of male member did not satisfied with this feature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, third, while, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8407079646 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88836055124 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5868389533 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.555555556 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145590823971 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734517726765 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528780511226 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112145313918 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496755970749 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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