The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the sales of four different items of a coffee shop located in an office building, divided by four periods of time a typical weekday.
Overall, in terms of drink, coffee was sold more than tea in all four periods while, in terms of food, pastries and sandwiches alternated during the four periods of time.
Early in the morning, from 7:30 AM to10:30 AM, people bought more coffee (265 units) and pastries (275 units) rather than tea (110 units) and sandwiches (50 units). From 10:30 AM to 2:30 PM, coffee (185) and sandwiches (200) represented the most sold items as opposed to tea (50) and pastries (95).
In the afternoon, from 2:30 PM to 5:30 PM, people bought more coffee (145) and pastries (150), like in the morning, instead of tea (35) and sandwiches (40). Finally, from 5:30 PM to 8:30 PM, coffee and sandwiches were again the most sold items (respectively 200 and 110 units) compared to tea and pastries (respectively 75 and 80 units).
divided by four periods of time a typical weekday.
divided by four periods of time in a typical weekday.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 83 100
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 176 200
No. of Characters: 739 1000
No. of Different Words: 83 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.199 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.47 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 2.285 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.59 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.882 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.295 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4