This table shows the percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below compares two separated age groups in terms of the proportion of schoolboys who took part in 5 types of sports in UK in the year of 2010.
Overall,the figure for 6-to-11-year-olds playing sports was higher than that of the 12-16 group, except from swimming, which shared the same amount. In addition, football was the most popular sport for both age group.
While the percentage of boys aging between 6 and 11 participating in football was 87%, the 12-to-16-year-old football players accounted for 78% of the total value. 35% of males aging from 6 to 11 took part in basketball, compared to 25% of older age group players. Moreover, in comparison to the proportion of schoolboys in 12-16 group playing cricket, which reached 34%, that of 6-11 group was 45%.
At that time, the rate of boys participating rugby in 6-to-11-year-olds was slightly higher than that of 12-16 group, at 23% and 21% respectively. Meanwhile, boys who had a tendency to swim from 6 to 11 years old occupied 19%, had an equal figure of that between 12 and 16 years old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8097826087 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01080579904 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4594530669 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183405989386 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101754146107 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627272190834 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138378429482 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683614114085 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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