The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The pie chart indicates the percentage of retail sectors sales on the internet in Canada from 2005 to 2010. Overall, the proportion of each retail sector changed over the period. While the figures for video games, food and beverage rose, the figures for other two retail sectors fell.
To begin, in 2005, video games which were the lowest retail sectors purchased accounted for 18% of total online sales. This percentage then increased to 23% of total online sales in 2010. Similarly, accounting for 22% of total online sales in 2005, the percentage of food and beverage rose to 32% of total online sales in 2010. Those retail sectors, therefore, were mostly sold in Canada at the end of the period.
In contrast, although electronics and appliance were the most retail sectors sold, with 32% of total online sales in 2005, this figure declined slightly to 30% of total online sales in 2010. Like electronics and appliance, home furnishing saw a similar trend that the online sales of this retail sector had fallen from 25% to 15% of total online sales during five years.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258215962441 0.268076937826 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.0892018779343 0.116061578633 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1220657277 0.0759168565197 161% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0281690140845 0.0366838410393 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.169014084507 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0234741784038 0.0379272487307 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29482173909 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0210936926555 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0892018779343 0.0948980150116 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00469483568075 0.00967000014798 49% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1076.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87978142077 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344262295082 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191256830601 0.247514529752 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136612021858 0.171178102325 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0928961748634 0.112407865282 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29482173909 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.546246751206 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.3959751712 49.3433353143 84% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3333333333 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7319488588 42.9750493124 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 135.714022679 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 39.4590163934 47.7609492067 83% => OK
Elegance: 3.84 2.94281807926 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50753230779 0.418131533498 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.227210195414 0.181151798455 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105189698771 0.0850326197045 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.695929529209 0.706616315825 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106633414544 0.157042692854 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286083772634 0.228904883108 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954052924534 0.108899403657 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.540444297954 0.367819155151 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0801876310431 0.0812612215331 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.413171535085 0.316326947829 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067859915578 0.0921553760075 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.