The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
The pie charts indicate the proportion of male and female in 6 types of occupation, divided into groups manual and non-manual, in Britain in 1992. Overall, there was a major difference that female mostly working in non-manual, while most of male working in both manual and non-manual jobs.
To begin, it is clear that managerial and professional had the highest number of men working, at 36%, compared with 29% of women. In the other hand, the figure for men and women working in other manual was mostly the same, at 26% and 27% respectively. Similarly, only a few employee were general labourers.
Regarding from the charts, 31% of women chose to work in clerical or related. This figure was fivefold the percentage of men in this career. In contrast, only 3% of women working in craft or similar, while the figure for men was significantly higher, at 24%. Finally, there was a minor percentage of both genders preferred to work in other non-manual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'few employees'.
Suggestion: few employees
...and 27% respectively. Similarly, only a few employee were general labourers. Regarding fr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216494845361 0.268076937826 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.128865979381 0.116061578633 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118556701031 0.0759168565197 156% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412371134021 0.0366838410393 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00515463917526 0.0131127313244 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.170103092784 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0515463917526 0.0379272487307 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73563228388 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154639175258 0.0210936926555 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0824742268041 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 955.0 1161.00487805 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.9 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85889570552 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337423312883 0.337110787985 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245398773006 0.247514529752 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171779141104 0.171178102325 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110429447853 0.112407865282 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73563228388 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 48.7401735406 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3629112518 42.9750493124 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 135.714022679 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 42.6509884117 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.5 2.94281807926 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247342641027 0.418131533498 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136177324994 0.181151798455 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119857387689 0.0850326197045 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.619445333621 0.706616315825 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175073702467 0.157042692854 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12513340308 0.228904883108 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905240603905 0.108899403657 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359144057257 0.367819155151 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0343973293545 0.0812612215331 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186841822065 0.316326947829 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046304305409 0.0921553760075 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.