what are the city's best features?
The diagram gives information about what a city’s are the best features. Edinburgh, which is one of city of Scotland, has various place to visit. In there, visitors can follow various comfortable destination.
By far the biggest percentage of visitors. Guest incline to choose festival of art in summer. The diagram shows thirty-six per cent in. In the fact, festival of art in summer is the best features of Edinburgh. Inhabitants who is interested festival of art in summer wait the moment. Festival of art in summer is the most popular. The second biggest of percentage which is in 22 per cent is visiting museums and galleries. The percentage shows visiting museums and galleries which is the second best features of Edinburgh. Clearly, festival of art in summer, museums and galleries will be become special to be visited.
Also, the center position of percentage are visiting friendly inhabitants and visiting cafes, bars, and restaurants which are in 16 per cent. The percentage of visiting friendly inhabitants and visiting cafes, bars, and restaurants is smaller than The percentage shows visiting museums and galleries. Inhabitants tend average interested to choose those place. On the other hand, the smallest percentage of visitors is others. Others get 10 per cent from the diagram.
Overall, summer art festival in Edinburgh is the most popular visited, but the festival is only created when the summer came.
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Sentence: Inhabitants who is interested festival of art in summer wait the moment.
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