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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.

The given line graph represents the consumption of fast food items in the United Kingdom over twenty year period.Food items like fish and chips and hamburgers have been largely consumed since the year 1970 till 1990.

As can be seen from the graph Pizza which was high in sales in the year 1970 gradually declined about 100 grams per week until 1980 and was stable for five year until 1985 and then slightly rose up in the year 1990.

In the year 1970, fish,chips and hamburger's were the least consumed fast food items in the UK. Starting from 1975 fish and chip's consumption dramatically reached high at a peak of about 500 grams where as hamburgers were at 480 grams.

All in all, over 20 years time period fast food items were highly consumed in the year 1990 comparison to the year 1970 being fish and chips the highest and pizza being the least .

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where as hamburgers were at 480 grams.
where hamburgers were at 280 grams.

in the year 1990 comparison to the year 1970
in the year 1990 in comparison to the year 1970

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