You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus One day you find something wrong with your accommodation So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened the reason you think what you decide to do

Submitted by Srinivas on Wed, 06/04/2014 - 05:11

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Jack studying in the university and representing as Head of Hostel committee. We are about 70 students staying at the hostel campus from the beginning of our University education. I am writing this letter on behalf of our committee to complain about the bad maintenance of rooms with the new vendor.

For the last first one and half year there was a good maintenance of hostel rooms and corridors and if we raise any issue, there was quick response from previous vendor. Last month there was a new vendor for maintenance department. From then, our rooms are not cleaned on d...

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there was quick response from previous vendor.
there was a quick response from previous vendor.

Before there is impact on hostel reputation.
Before there is an impact on hostel reputation.

Sentence: For the last first one and half year there was a good maintenance of hostel rooms and corridors and if we raise any issue, there was quick response from previous vendor.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, post-determiner is not usually followed by a numeral, ordinal
Suggestion: Refer to last and first

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