You borrowed same books from your school or College library Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time

Essay topics:

You borrowed same books from your school or College library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time

Dear librarian
I am writing  this letter in order to for apologies.
I am very sorry for not return the books Because when I am going to cours work so I was so hurrying and I didn't have a enough time for giving books.
I completely forgot about it because I was in such a hurry at that time and on the other hand I didn't have time to read all these books  because I had coursework. unfortunately I'm afraid it will take a long time, and I will  try to return it soon but I am very interested in the books you recommended and hopefully  if I tell the specific nobody can find these books because it clearly tells about the masterpiece life of very important people, nowadays it is very difficult to find books of this type
it is very difficult to find books of these type I will  ask you to recommend the same work of art

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear librarian I am writing  this letter in order to for apologies. ...
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...o cours work so I was so hurrying and I didnt have a enough time for giving books. I...
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...k so I was so hurrying and I didnt have a enough time for giving books. I comple...
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Suggestion: didn't
...ry at that time and on the other hand I didnt have time to read all these books  beca...
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... didnt have time to read all these books  because I had coursework. unfortunately ...
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... these books  because I had coursework. unfortunately Im afraid it will take a long time, and...
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...because I had coursework. unfortunately Im afraid it will take a long time, and I ...
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...aid it will take a long time, and I will  try to return it soon but I am very inte...
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... the books you recommended and hopefully  if I tell the specific nobody can find t...
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...icult to find books of these type I will  ask you to recommend the same work of ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19375 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50461293167 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54375 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.716692329 43.030603864 327% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.75 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220775608819 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109679798801 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702630218859 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122771608834 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750253920445 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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