You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir,
My name is Clark and I am writing this recommendation to other citizens for one of our good neighbourd dining establishment: The Leon Star Cafe.
The restaurant is situated in middle of the city, right close to the church. There are many impressive attribute that struck me when I were there with my family for a special occasion, as well as the decoration and ambience. Also, I particularly enjoyed the relaxing attitude of the place. Moreover, there were a huge range of choice concerning the meals and desserts, all very delicious and well presented. Even the staff was very friendly, welcoming and highly professional. We have ordered roast turkey breast with chipotle chili sauce and for dessert a cantaloupe with lime and mint for each of us, it was all delightful and we enjoyed it a lot. We really had a good time.
I hope after reading this, many customers would often visit this place, bon appetite!
Yours truly,
Clark
Comments
Thank you very much Sir.
Thank you very much Sir.
The restaurant is situated in middle of the city
The restaurant is situated in the middle of the city
There are many impressive attribute
There are many impressive attributes
a huge range of choice
a huge range of choices
Sentence: There are many impressive attribute that struck me when I were there with my family for a special occasion, as well as the decoration and ambience.
Error: ambience Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.568 4.0
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