You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram provides the detailed procedure and steps of making carbonated beverages.
Overall, it can be seen from the emergent illustration that there involve a total of five steps in the making of carbonated drinks from the beginning to packaged ready to be delivered to the supermarket for the consumers to buy.
First of all, in stage 1, raw water is cleaned through the use of a filter and collected into a rectangular vessel where water softener and chemicals are added to it. This chemically treated water is now passed via a pump to an electric heater. Immediately following the heating evaporation, it is transferred through the cooling pipe and directed the water further into a container, to which also carbon dioxide is added from the opposite direction, and thus bubbles are created and go up in the vessel.
The third is called mixing where colouring, syrup, and flavour are incorporated into the existing mixture. In the next step, the drinks are being bottled ready after filtering one more time and this stage is named filtering and filling. All the bottles are then put in boxes to deliver to the store. Finally, packaged carbonated beverages are supplied to the supermarket via big delivery truck.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, third, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05392156863 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72119760001 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5981029536 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0882139499415 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376729456 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036136155185 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668940157562 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378785291615 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.