You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line chart compares the number of passengers at the different moments of the day in the London Underground Station.

Overall, it is obvious that the figure of people using sub-train was highest at 8 a.m while it fluctuated all day.

Looking at the graph, we can see two times when there were the most people in Underground Station. It was at 8 a.m and 18 p.m, with 400 and just under 400, respectively. However, there were also two times when this place witnessed the lowest number of passengers, with 100 at both times 6 a.m and 16 p.m. In most of the day, there was a fluctuation in the number of travelers between around 150 and 300.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 529.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48305084746 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53559831868 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 149.4 283.868780488 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7831515782 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138973296023 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801116182371 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552017699812 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100124252143 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061468839266 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.