Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say
- How did you lose the certificate?
- Why do you need it?
- What do you expect the principal to do?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to show that I am very disappointed in these days because I have lost a precious thing. Three month age, my company has provided me a great opportunity to attend two months programming course in your college but I have lost precious certificate.
I had very excited when I got this certificate from you. It is very helpful for me at my promotion time. This is first time for me to study in England. Furthermore, somehow my briefcase had stolen on the departure time at Hithrow airport England. I felt very sad and upset on that time. Besides, my company also wants to see this as a proof of course completion because all expenditure paid by my company. So I have faced so many problems if I unable to show this certificate to my company then I will paid 10 percent penalty of all expenditure of this course.
I request you to send me duplicate copy of this certificate. So you can avoid my problem. I will appreciate you if you will send it on my address.
Yours Truly,
Kulwinder
but I have lost precious certificate.
but I have lost the precious certificate.
This is first time for me to study in England
This is the first time for me to study in England
my briefcase had stolen
my briefcase had been stolen
because all expenditure paid by my company.
because all expenditures are paid by my company.
Sentence: So I have faced so many problems if I unable to show this certificate to my company then I will paid 10 percent penalty of all expenditure of this course.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to I and unable
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 188 200
No. of Characters: 813 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.703 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.324 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.649 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.989 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.634 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4