A friend has asked you to babysit on Saturday and wants to know how much you charge per hour for this. Unfortunately, you already have a commitment this weekend and cannot help. However, you free the following weekend. Write a letter to your friend explaining that you are not able to help this time, but could help later. Explain also what your fee for the service is.
Dear Nidhi,
How are you? Thank you for asking me about babysitting for your son. I am writing this to apologize that I would not be able to help you out.
In your letter, you told me that because of the office work you have to go out of the station and you will late in the evening and hence, you want me to babysit your son. But dear, I am sorry I cannot make it as I am already occupied. I have to go on the trip with the school student this Saturday and I will return on Sunday night.
I can help you next time however, I will be free on next weekend, if you want assistance from my end, I will be available at your disposal. As you were asking about my babysitting service charges, I charge 10 $ per hour and it involves lunch and snacks for the child and even homework also.
One’s again I extremely sorry for not helping you. Write me back if you want any help from me and accept my apology.
Best Wishes,
Jot
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
...y babysitting service charges, I charge 10 $ per hour and it involves lunch and snac...
^^^^
Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... snacks for the child and even homework also. One’s again I extremely sorry for not...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09340659341 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14373472117 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3304739346 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7272727273 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473482578266 0.216113520407 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174313817003 0.0766984524023 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902075955523 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308685784068 0.12726935374 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610530848309 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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