A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Lu,
I hope you find this letter in good health. I’d like to tell you, that there is an opening which has come up for a travel blogger in a social media firm back in India.
As per the job description, it needs a social media intern for their youtube channel, who can help them with video filming and editing. It also involves, extensive travel through the length and breadth of the country to capture the culture and important festivals.
They need professionals who are well versed with Canon 99A, and have a masters in Filmmaking. As you are already specialized in it and moreover have always been fascinated by our country’s culture, this opportunity can turn out be a perfect mix of work and pleasure.
You need to make a short video of your work and send it to the Global Head HR at simons.dubey@gmail.com. I hope this opportunity piques your interest and you decide to move to India for work.
Hope to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Pious
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to see you soon. Best Regards, Pious
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83307834144 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8005230097 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298869625789 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106993908378 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738750995986 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156867942762 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631439446833 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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