Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say– Why do you want to work from home?– Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this to let you know about my interest to avail the facility of working from house and right at this moment, this opportunity is important for me. Allow me to explain my situation first.
Couple of weeks ago, my wife gave birth of a baby and she is still not fit enough to care of family matters. Meanwhile, appointing a nurse is very expensive. You know traffic condition in the road is not good as well. So, after travelling long time and coming back to my living place, I cannot give time to my family and fail to take care of my child which is very disappointing as a father.
If I get the opportunity to work from my home then it is possible to give more effort to tasks as I do not have to waste time on road. On the other hand, a tension free working environment will be ensured as I will be able to remain with my family members.
So, from office if I get a desktop computer and a modem, then it is very much possible to provide service from my resident.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours
Jack
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, then, well, while, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28217821782 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41379661054 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3799727201 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159334989535 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635513915912 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562650168133 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972649788824 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049946314736 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.