Write an inquiry letter to your new employer with a suggestion to hire your friend or relative. In your letter say,
Who is this person?
Why should your employer hire him/her?
Suggest what job he/she should be doing?
Dear sir,
Greetings of the day. I have recently joined this organization under a position of account executive with Finance department. I am writing this letter in order to provide a reference candidate for any suitable job in a sales department with our organization.
Since I had joined this esteemed organization, one of my close friend, Mr. Samir Patel has enquired if any possible opening with us suitable to him. We have accomplished our graduation together from the same university. However, He has mastered in his sales and operation subject in the year of 2015 with distinction. He is carrying 2 years of working experience one of the residential retail organization
He is the game changer of his existing organization where he has implemented major changes to double the profit of the business. At the best of my knowledge, Samir is adept in operations and versed at problem solving, effective communication, and leadership. He is flexible to settle in any working environment swiftly. So, by looking into the current competition facing by the retail industry, we should hire such people who come with innovative ideas with them to take the organization at next level.
Moreover, He is carrying all the qualification, experienc, and skills suitable for the position of Area manager in any retail organization. Thus, I strongly recommend his candidature for the position of Area manager with our organization.
Here, I am forwarding his resume for your kind perusal. I hope you will look into his candidature for the suitability with our organization.
Thanking you,
Yours Faithfully
XXXX
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...organization at next level. Moreover, He is carrying all the qualification, ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 3.85567010309 622% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29343629344 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17557181415 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 290.88556701 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8132091313 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148835084395 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481229647896 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430388540448 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070783250133 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269546581953 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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