Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about
• The promotion
• The celebration
• Their accommodation
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to let you know about the celebration which, I planned after getting promoted.
Yes, I am promoted, you read right. Well, I was expecting this promotion from the last year. As you know, I was working as a senior relationship executive in WWICS for the last three years. I had got many prizes such as employee of the year and best employee awards from my organization. Finally, God granted my wish and I have been promoted as a Branch Manager. I joined the office as a Branch Manager from yesterday.
After joining, I thought to celebrate this moment but with my friend, it will never complete. Well, I have decided to arrange a pool party on 7th April at 7 o’clock in the evening at Hotel Deccan. At this party, I have only invited our friends and we all are free on the weekend, therefore, I opted for this date and time.
I know you are having a question that where to stay. Don’t worry I have arranged three rooms for us in the same hotel so that we can relax after having fun.
I really want you to be part of my happiness. I look forward to meeting you.
Yours Truly,
Kinu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jot, How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, really, so, therefore, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34545454545 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38902449057 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1148781624 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.2352941176 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219219131514 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640986834431 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465975318712 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115414419131 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465231430575 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.06 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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