Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you in order to provide me with more specification regarding Tony Robins’ seminar. First, I would be much obliged if you could outline the main points of the seminar because I am bewildered as the advertisement is saying that the program is about vocational skills, but the brochure is illustrating that it is about core competencies of personal aptitude.
Second, I have a demanding job which requires to be present at the workplace on a daily basis, so that it is quite difficult to take time off from work. Thus, could you inform me of the date and time in order to be able to attend and delegate my duties to a colleague of mine?
Ultimately, I will be highly appreciated if I could know how much does the seminar cost including accommodation. Because, as you know, the prices are surging which is resulting in increasing the financial burden. Once again, thank you for your magnanimous.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
David Peter
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... highly appreciated if I could know how much does the seminar cost including accommo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82485875706 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88568413152 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2507309904 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131518394204 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433494737634 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471482331843 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630959720613 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601891720626 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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