Write a letter to your friend to inform him/her that one of your relative is traveling to his/her country and say -Describe your relative, why is he traveling? Why do you think they should meet?

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend to inform him/her that one of your relative is traveling to his/her country and say -Describe your relative, why is he traveling? Why do you think they should meet?

Dear Alia,

I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of the spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you about my cousin sister Meena who is visiting Canada next month.

She is visiting Canada to take part in the international seminar presentation on the cardiology. As, you know she is cardiologist and practising in Apollo healthcare as an assistant doctor. She is a good doctor, Moreover, she is the famous doctor in locality. She has done her master in medical science at Canada university and she is coming there for the first time after master and many doctors will attend the seminar from around the globe.

I will send some Indian sarees and some Gujarati snacks. You should meet her at his hotel and take these things from her. Furthermore, you would have opportunity to learn about cardiology as she has the immense knowledge and you also study in same field. Also, if you can spare more time then can go around and explore beautiful places with her.

Hope you can manage the time to meet her. I am writing down the address of her hotel and the cell number for further communication.

Yours lovingly,

Bharat.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iversity and she is coming there for the first time after master and many doctors...
^^
Line 13, column 289, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...field. Also, if you can spare more time then can go around and explore beautiful pla...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7684729064 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47795492749 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8168206082 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4615384615 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173402247293 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685310036842 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642523881206 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101416311245 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479594388216 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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