Writing task 1 (a letter)
You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say
– Suggest what to bring
– Recommend where they should stay
– What places they should visit
Hello Mr. and Mrs Patel,
Hope you are doing great with your health and spirits.
I got your letter that you will be visiting my town in next week and it's good to heard that finally you got a chance to visit my town and I will also get a chance to meet you because after our first meeting at BN Hall, Mumbai we did not get a chance to get along with each other.
As you are visiting in next week and right now there is a rainy season so I suggest you to bring a Raincoat and an Umbrella with you so you can save your self from cold, fever and enjoy the visit in my town. I know that you will be visiting here for official work in Townhall so I recommend you to book your stay in Park Avenue Hotel which is just 1km away from your official work place and ambience and facilities you will get at Hotel is very nice and not so expensive. Once, you are done with your work you can take a bus ride for City tour OR you can hire a cab and must go to visit places like Akshardham Temple, Adalaj Vav, Kakariya Lake, Thol Lake etecetara as these are the well known places for tourists attraction in my town and you will love to spend time in these places. Before you leave from here, on Sunday morning I will come to meet you at your hotel and from there we will go at Patang Hotel to take lunch as it's famous revolving Hotel in my town and from here you can enjoy the view of whole city and then I will take you for some shopping and drop you at your hotel in evening.
I am eagerly waiting for your visit in my town.
Kind Regards,
Divya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re is a rainy season so I suggest you to bring a Raincoat and an Umbrella with y...
^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rainy season so I suggest you to bring a Raincoat and an Umbrella with you so y...
^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can save your self from cold, fever and enjoy the visit in my town. I know that...
^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from cold, fever and enjoy the visit in my town. I know that you will be visitin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 309.0 206.0 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.99676375405 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.85722738961 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.51419126 44.8134815571 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.375 76.5299724578 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.625 16.8248392259 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222479761561 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109787739485 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561214753945 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107417214241 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690544867823 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 8.37731958763 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.51 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.