You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

Give details of your visit to the restaurant
Explain the reason for the celebration
Say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to you in order to express my grateful for the splendid service and the high quality of food that your esteemed restaurant provided us last Sunday night.

We were a group of nine, which were celebrating a special occasion with my family, close friends and colleagues from work. We arrived earlier than expected because the traffic was light. Surprisingly, we did not wait for a long time due to the tables were prepared.

The special occasion was my 30th birthday. My wife, therefore, agreed with family and friends to organize it at your decent restaurant. Your menu offers a great deal of choice and everything was available. Accordingly, we order a grilled chicken and a smoked beef which were very palatable with a cake as a desert.

I would like to inform you that your restaurant is popular in our city because you have not only a professional stuff but also a fresh food. All of us were very delighted and we spend an amazing night.
I look forward to seeing you in your esteemed restaurant.
Yours faithfully,
Paula

Votes
Average: 6.5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed restaurant. Yours faithfully, Paula
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78191489362 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64024357732 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4245953731 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302456534368 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950006165214 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647073483863 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156836429517 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470796844537 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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