You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should:
– Describe the course you are taking.
– Explain what you don’t like about the course.
– Give your opinion about what should be done about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Hoang, a member of the “Kitchen Wonders” class. I am writing to express my annoyance with the cookery course which is currently taking place every Monday and Thursday evening at your school.
First of all, the classroom is crowded with approximately twenty students, which causes difficulties interacting with the teacher during the lessons. Also, the teacher is likely unable to give detailed and precise instructions to each individual’s recipe. Another problem is / Another dissatisfaction is the projector which seems to be outdated, so it almost shows fairly blurry images and it does have a harmful influence on our eyes.
I suggest that the school should consider reducing the number of the students in the class in order to enhance/improve interaction between the teacher and learners. I would also appreciate it if the school could install a new projector so that the quality of images can be improved.
I hope that you will take my suggestions into account to increase students’ motivation as well as learning efficiency.
Yours faithfully,
Hoang Duc Anh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Hoang, a member of the “Kitch...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... quality of images can be improved. I hope that you will take my suggestions ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35795454545 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06194883342 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7133072292 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176151492815 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604782295968 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676551785455 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932985726486 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576811742184 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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