Dear Nick,
I would be coming to Canada as I have enroled for an english programme in Toronto. I would like if you could assist me in some ways.
I am taking this course to help me enhance my vocabulary. Furthermore, I would like to opt for a part-time job in your country. I am aware of the expenses of staying there so it would help me meet my overheads.
Since you are a localite over there and I do no have any other friend/relative, would you please help me find a suitable job. You can ask in your neighbourhood or colleagues/staff if they are looking for a helper/cleaner/caretaker.
I would be really obliged if you could do the needful. Looking for an early reply.
Kind regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...if you could assist me in some ways. I am taking this course to help me enhanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 583.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5546875 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38221703766 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 182.7 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1840022371 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362936037973 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129061145806 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102679639091 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211568542347 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857162841886 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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