You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Essay topics:

You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Dear sir,

This letter is in context to a restaurant named 'Soul Kitchen' at Sunrise Plaza. My objective of its publicity is to make people aware of its delicacies.

I visited this restaurant on Saturday night with my family. What attracted me most was its decor and ambience. It has some beautiful 3-D images on the walls in the interiors. Coming to the meal part, it has wide range of menu to choose from. The best turned out to be the Chinese sizzler. Not only was it loaded with exotic vegetables but also the quantity was sufficient to suffice our hunger.

Another icing on the cake was a complimentary desert which they served us. It was truly mouth-watering. I would recommend this restaurant as it is a total value for money and also its cuisine is sumptuous. For a foodie, its an appropriate place to dine in. Hope more and more people will visit this place after knowing my experience.

Yours faithfully,
Nick

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71779141104 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68701851517 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6120861477 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.9285714286 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6428571429 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122482505654 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384578095108 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386138311472 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815466232172 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254445856028 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.91 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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