You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and

Essay topics:

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.

Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear sir,

I received your letter stating that I have been called for an interview at your college on the 1st of September 2018. First of all I want to thank you for the same. However,this letter is to bring to your kind notice that I will not be able to come for the interview due to a prior commitment at the same time. I am extremely sorry for the same.

I would like to know if the same can be taken later at the day? If not, then maybe some other day, say on the 2nd or 3rd of September? If possible, I will surely make up for that. Moreover, I would like to inquire about the duration of the interview, How long will it take? At exactly what time it will commence?

Another query in my mind is, whether I have to take some tests during the interview. I would be really obliged if you could provide me with the specified information. Looking forward for a prompt and positive reply from your end. Thanking you in advance.

Yours faithfully,
Nick

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
... want to thank you for the same. However,this letter is to bring to your kind notice ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, then, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3021978022 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37139318023 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8059537861 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.9285714286 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234097280187 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754161042103 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577209628216 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152561743138 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846708990168 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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