You have booked two theater tickets in advance for you and your friend, however due to some reason you are unable to come. Write to your friend about it and say
– What is the reason?
– Why can’t you move your other commitment to a different time?
– Suggest what to do with the extra ticket.
Dear Mini,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I would not be able to join you in a theater due to some urgent work.
Unfortunately, the reason of my unavailability is the last minute on call weekend support, requested by my manager. Although, I have informed them about my preplanned weekend in advance, but it seems like the issue is critical and I ought to be present because I am a primary resource of the project where issue has arrived.
However, I know, it was me who insisted you to go for a movie and you have cancelled all your prior work. But I am expected to be available 24/7 on call, therefore, it would not be feasible, not to answer the call after the commitment.
Hence, instead of cancelling the booking, you should rather visit the theater either with your family or with close friend of yours. I remember, while planning your sister was very keen to join us and we couldn't involve her due to shortage of tickets. Thus, I suggest you both should go and enjoy the movie without worrying about me. I have shared tickets with you in a mail.
Next time I will make sure not to disappoint you with such uninvited interruption.
Best regards,
Sonali
Comments
Dear Alex,
Dear Alex,
Hope this letter finds you in sheer good health. It is with regret, I am writing this letter to you to inform that I won't be able to attend the evening movie show today. I know this is the last day of the show and the struggle behind in purchasing the tickets. I sincerely apologies for the inconvenience caused at the last moment.
Unfortunately, today early morning my uncle suddenly got unwell and admitted in the Manchester hospital. He was diagnosed with an early stage of ulcer and currently he is under treatment. As my family is out of town, I am in a position to completely take care of him until they return.
However, Rae called me sometime before to check whether I have any extra ticket for the same movie show you booked. Hence if you don't mind, you can accompany her in my ticket.
Hope you both have a great time!
Yours truthfully,
Kolz.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... sister was very keen to join us and we couldnt involve her due to shortage of tickets....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55347357001 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1360196619 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329263785433 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112295427696 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864267102288 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164389158582 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079618192337 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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